I'll critique your first page with special emphasis on your first paragraph and first sentence. You want to grab the reader right at the bigining. Peopel don't have time to wait and see if your book will pick up speed a few pages into the manuscript.
First Page Critique
$7.00Price
- I'm a product detail. I'm a great place to add more information about your product such as sizing, material, care and cleaning instructions. This is also a great space to write what makes this product special and how your customers can benefit from this item.